2016年初级商务英语写作句子逻辑冲刺指导

　　2016年初级商务英语写作句子逻辑冲刺指导

　　Rewrite the following sentences to achieve conciseness:

　　(1) Please see that an enquiry is conducted to determine the reason.

　　(2) We express our regret at being unable to fulfill your order on this occasion.

　　(3) Payment of their accounts will be made by Johnsons next week.

　　(4) It is on the last day of June that the meeting will be held.

　　(5) We are returning all the merchandise that is defective.

　　(6) In the event that Model 404 is not available, please substitute Model 606.

         Rewrite each sentence in order to express its meaning more courteously.

　　(1) You won' t get your order because you didn' t give us the information.

　　(2) We must tell you that we can't accept your proposal.

　　(3) You claim that there Were 3 witnesses to the accident. We need their names and addresses.

　　(4) Thank you in advance for all the help you will give me.

　　(5) Your letter is not clear at al1. I can't understand it.

　　(6) We need the statement by the end of next week.

　　(7) You are requested to send payment by 8 June.

　　(8) This is to inform you that the 'goods' Will not be ready by June 4. We will not be able to deliver them until June 8.

　　参考答案

　　(1) Please find out the reason.

　　(2) We are sorry we cannot meet your present order.

　　(3) Johnsons will pay their accounts next week.

　　(4) The meeting will be held on 30 June.

　　(5) We are returning all the defective merchandise.

　　(6) If Model 404 is not available, please substitute Model 606.

         (1) You will get your order as soon as you give us the information.

　　(2) Unfortunately, we can not accept your proposal.

　　(3) You mentioned that there were 3 witnesses to the accident. May we have their names and addresses?

　　(4) Thank you for all the help you will give me.

　　(5) If I understand your letter correctly…

　　(6) Could you send us the statement by the end of next week?

　　(7) Please send payment by 8 June.

　　(8) We are sorry, but, it will be at least June 8 before we can deliver the goods to you.