2013年8月29日雅思写作范文

2013年8月29日雅思考试全科回忆及解析

　　小作文：the graph below shows the value in Australian dollar of Australian trade with three countries in 2004 - 2009.

　　写作策略：主体部分三段。每段写趋势和进出口对比。最后结论写三个国家的差异。

　　大作文：Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

　　positive

　　negative

　　1 解放人力

　　2 提高效率

　　1 失业率,贫富差距

　　2 人类对机器的依赖

　　3 道德问题

　　Computer technology is advancing dramatically since its invention and has shown some possibility of intelligence, which means (that) they are capable to think, and therefore make judgment and initiate action in complex situation, featuring like human brains. This excites many people while arousing some concern about its hidden hazard to human being. (定语从句，宾语从句，非谓语，)

　　Of course those optimists have their own reasons. The first one is that intelligent computers would free human labor to an enormous extent. They would replace human workers in many walks of life, performing many tasks in medical procedure, manufacture, domestic service, space and ocean exploration and so on. They can work more efficiently, accurately than human counterparts and they never feel tired or fear any danger. It is claimed that these advantages would increase the productivity of the whole world for long run and bring human comfort and convenience. (表语从句，非谓语，比较句型，并列句，形式主语)

　　However it also makes sense to worry about the potential risk that computational intelligence may impose on human race. It is generally believed that employment rate would decline if artificial intelligent machines are widely applied to substitute for human labors. Correspondingly, the wealth gap can be inferred wider. In addition to economic impact, human community may increase dependence on smart technology, losing some basic living skills or life experience. Some pessimists show their concern about ethical issue in literature involving robots which are likely to manipulate humans. Nonetheless, many people hold the belief that no matter how intelligent a computer is, it is programed by human being and is under human’s control for sure. (形式主语，被动句，定语从句，条件状语从句，非谓语，同位语从句，让步状语从句)

　　Based on the discussion above, I personally think that whether advanced technology can benefit human race or not is determined by how we human utilize it. Technology is supposed to be neutral and has no threat on human designers. If we put it to good use, then we would make the most of technology. (非谓语，宾语从句，主语从句，被动句，条件状语从句)

　　词汇拓展

　　1. Intelligence 智力

　　2. invention 发明

　　3. make judgment 做出判断

　　4. initiate action发起行动

　　5. feature 以…为特征

　　6. hazard 潜在危险

　　7. optimist 乐观主义者

　　8. pessimist 悲观主义者

　　9. free v. 解放

　　10. walks of life 生活很多领域

　　11. perform many tasks 干活

　　12. medical procedure手术

　　13. manufacture 制造

　　14. domestic service 家庭服务

　　15. accurately 准确地

　　16. make the most of 充分利用

　　17. makes sense 有道理

　　18. impose 施加

　　19. artificial intelligent machine 人工智能机器

　　20. apply 应用

　　21. substitute for 替代

　　22. Correspondingly 因此

　　23. wealth gap 贫富差距

　　24. infer 推断

　　25. ethical 道德的

　　26. literature 文学作品

　　27. involve 涉及

　　28. manipulate 操控

　　29. Nonetheless 尽管如此

　　30. Program 编程

　　31. under control 在掌控之中

　　32. Based on 基于

　　33. is determined by 取决于

　　34. utilize 利用

　　35. is supposed 本应该

　　36. put it to good use 好好利用

　　37. counterpart 对应部分