2016年托福考试口语例题及范文推荐（20）

　　托福口语题目：

　　Which class would you join for fun? Art class or science class.Please give your reasons with details.

　　托福口语参考范文：

　　Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class. By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.

　　托福口语参考答案：

　　Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me instead of [than] art class because I am the one who likes doesn’t like/ has no passion for things of art. Inthis way, Most of the time, when the others are appreciating a great aunt art work, I will just count how long will the class end the class will last/ when the class will end. Sometimes, I even may/ may even have to take some measures to prevent myself from falling sleep asleep when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art.

　　However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscoverted undiscovered asteroid, all of these got my attention arouse/ spark my interest/ arouse/ spark/ awaken/ pique my curiosity. And I was overwhelmed by tons of secrets of the cosmos.

　　托福口语模板分析：

　　请不要把than和rather than相混淆。形容词比较级后边要接的是than，表示“做比较”，如果是rather than = instead of，意思是“而不是”。故可以说：I think A is better than B. 或 I would choose A rather than B. 但是不能串了，I think A is better rather than B.

　　口误可不行哦!既然观点是：选the science class，那必然是对艺术的事情都不感兴趣咯，所以，这里应该是一个口误(比较严重哦，障碍到了对方的理解)

　　In this way, 的意思是“依照这种方式，”但是，在这里没有什么方式，所以改成了Most of the time，意思是“大多数时候，”表明这是一种常态

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　　PS: 所以你看，这就是为什么can的否定式，必须写成can't或者cannot(连在一起)，因为空格之后完全是不一样的意思哦!这里不是can的否定式cannot(不能够)，而是：can not only(不只是能够)!!!

　　the others这种说法是错误的，如果是the那就是：the other，表示是2者中的另一个(one 和 the other);要么就直接others，很多个里边的其他几个

　　How long后边是引导的如果是一个简单句的问句, 则will需提前

　　但如果how long一道的是整个句子的宾语, 那就用正常语序

　　这里的take some measures to prevent myself from falling asleep:

　　A. take some measures的说法不够具体：请问，究竟是采取什么样的措施呢?建议改为说某种具体的措施：比如，课前喝超多咖啡，课前用凉水洗脸，上课的时候把老师的脸想象成自己的idol等等~

　　B. fall + asleep(形容词，作表语，表示“睡着了”的状态)

　　when/ while my classmates are immersed in a passionate work of music art. 为了确保主谓一致，把classmate改成了classmates(后边是are)同时，因为art class实际上指的是“美术课”，所以不建议说a work of music。PS: work在当“作品”讲的时候，是可数名词哦~所以，这里加a是正确哒~

　　However, in the science class, it is so interesting that I can hardly be distracted by the surroundings.

　　A. However, 表示“转折关系”，但是，这里是表示“对比关系”，建议改为“By contrast/ In contrast,”

　　B. 上文说的是：美术课会让我觉得很想睡觉，很想下课——就是无聊嘛。那么，下面对比的时候，应该是说：科学课让我觉得不无聊。可是can hardly be distracted by the surroundings的意思却是让我不分心/注意力更集中。建议改为：hardly feel bored

　　【修改后的版本】

　　Personally, I believe that science class is a better choice for me because I'm just the one who has no passion for anything about art. Most of the time, when others are appreciating a great work of art, I will just count when the class will end. Sometimes, I may even have to drink a lot of coffee before the class to prevent myself from falling asleep during the class.

　　By contrast, in the science class, it is so interesting that I hardly feel bored. The mysterious black hole, the magical universal gravitation, and the undiscovered asteroid, all of these can spark my interest and I am overwhelmed by tons of the secrets of the cosmos.