雅思写作：2010年5月15写作回顾

Nowadays, distance-learning programs are such common thing for us, but some people argue that they're not as good as those by attending in a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
　　
　　本文是关于学习方式。远程学习和学校教育之间的PK。基本和老师PK因特网的题目划等号（如下）。
　　
　　Computers are widely used in education. Some people think that teachers do not play an important role in the classroom now.
　　
　　To what extent do you agree or disagree? 　　
　　
　　远程学习好处
　　
　　1 save time as well as money（时间+金钱原则）
　　
　　分类论证
　　
　　For one thing, we can listen to online lectures without leaving our homes and arrange our own study schedule at our own space. For another, it is easy for us to take free courses on the Internet and save a large proportion of transportation fees, thereby reducing our daily expenses. 　　
　　
　　2 favor those who have either restricted mobility or irregular schedule. （分情况看问题）
　　
　　对比论证+分类论证
　　
　　In the past, for students who were physically challenged, they had to take great pains to arrive at their school. But fortunately, it is now possible for them to turn on the computer and then begin their online course within seconds, without worrying about the long journey to schools or sometimes discrimination from some of their classmates.
　　
　　At the same time, it is by no means easy for the working population, who have strong desire for knowledge, to spend stationery periods of time at traditional schools due to their fixed working timetable. Therefore, the availability of online-course at best caters to them. 　
　　
　　学校教育的好处（约等于老师的作用）
　　
　　1 First of all, while it is impossible for the computer to explain some complex ideas, teachers at regular schools could serve an essential function.
　　
　　对比论证：Admittedly, on-line courses may determine which answer is right, but fail to tell why the answer is right or explain the answer in another way. In contrast, teachers are able to provide you with a satisfactory explanation or others means to arrive at the final key. 　　
　　
　　2 Students are able to strengthen their communication and team-work spirit.
　　
　　因果链拓展：When having a course in a classroom, students could be organized into groups for discussion, which not only improves their learning effectiveness but also their capability to cooperate with others, an ability urgently needed in almost everyone’s future career.