2013年12月英语四级考试真题答案卷二_第9页

写作导航: On the Overuse of the Mobile Phone

第1段：描述图片，概述生活中出 现过度使用手机的现象

Having a cell phone in hand and at the ready, growing increasing dependent on their mobile phones

第2段：详细介绍过度使用手机 产生的不良后果

trigger many health problems

an Immediate threat to their Iife, health and pro property less chance of face-to-face interactions

第3段：进行总结，并提出建议

use them appropriately and rationally

参考范文

On the Overuse of the Mobile Phone 【1】As is shown in the picture, having a mobile phone in hand and at the ready is the default mode while walking on the streets. 【2】What this cartoon symbolically reveals is that people nowadays, especially young people, are growing increasingly dependent on their mobile phones.

【3】It is true that the mobile phone has brought great convenience to people's life. However, just as is illustrated in the picture, the overuse of it may lead to several bad consequences. 【4】To begin with, there is evidence that long-term exposure to electromagnetic radiation may trigger many health problems, such as insomnia, headaches and even cancers.【5】In addition, when people immerse themselves in the mobile phone, they tend to pay less attention to their surroundings, posing an immediate threat to their life, health and property.【6】Last but not least, excessive use of mobile phones means much less chance of face-to-face interactions with the people who populate their real lives.

【7】In conclusion, while mobile phones have contributed a lot to making our life more convenient, we should use them appropriately and rationally.

【1】开门见山,对图片进行简单描述。

【2】点明图片揭示的现象,

【3】点出手机对人们生活的积极影响。

【4】【5】【6】分三点阐明过度使用手机 对人们生活的消极影响。

【7】总结全文:使用手机要适度。