2019年英语四级优秀作文指导：我对慈善行为的看法

　　My Views on Manners of Charity

　　1. 慈善事业可以通过很多渠道表现，有人说“陈光标式慈善”是慈善的倒退，有人则表示他让慈善在创新中飞得更高、更远;

　　2. 谈谈你对慈善方式的看法。

　　【范文】

　　My Views on Manners of Charity

　　Chen Guangbiao, a well-known Chinese entrepreneur and philanthropist, has made headlines in China for handing out money on the street. Hot discussion has arisen about his high-profile manners. Some say that his unusual manner of doing charity appears kind of backward while the others think it ensures the charity industry to go further and fly higher by self-innovation.

　　As far as I am concerned, I highly appreciate Mr. Chen’s generosity and kind heart. It is quite natural that various presentations emerge in the development of charity as there is no definite way of doing good to others. No matter what the way is, if the outcome appears beneficial and can really help the needy, we should support it. What’s more, we should applaud his public example of charity as his actions can inspire more people to follow suit. The futher development of charity cause requires understanding and support of the public.

　　【点评】

　　文章开头由陈光标街头派钱的新闻引入文章探讨的主题——慈善方式，然后介绍了人们对此的两种不同观点。第二段阐述了自己对慈善方式的看法，说明自己很欣赏陈光标那颗慷慨善良的心，慈善发展过程中出现多种形式是很正常的，不管方式如何，只要结果的确是帮助了那些需要帮助的人，我们就应该支持。

　　第一段中entrepreneur意为“企业家”，philanthropist意为“慈善家”， made headlines意为“上了报纸头条”， high-profile manners意为“高调的方式”， self-innovation意为“自我创新”;第二段中highly appreciate意为 “高度欣赏”， generosity意为“慷慨”，doing good to others意为“帮助别人”，inspire more people to follow suit意为“激励更多的人照做”。