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　　[范文与解析]

　　[l] Nowadays it's very common for parents to hire private tutors for their children. [2] Some people believe that private tutoring is helpful for a child to make rapid progress in his study, while others hold opposite views.

　　[3] As far as I am concerned, private tutoring is not advisable for most people. [4] First, private tutoring is not necessary. [5] If a student listen carefully to his teachers in classes, finish his homework on time, and study hard, he can perform well in his study without any private tutoring. [6] Second, private tutoring may put a child under great stress. [7] Once, a child told me that he hated private tutoring because it takes so much of his time that he can not play with his friends very often. In return he just won't listen to his private tutor.

　　[8] In one word, private tutoring is not a heal-all, so I think parents should think twice before they rush to hire a private tutor for their kids.

　　【答案解析】

　　[写作指南]

　　这篇作文要求讨论“请家教”的问题。Outline足“现象—正反两种观点-自己的观点”模式。这种题目有两种写作思路。

　　第一种思路，把重点放在“不同的看法”上，然后略写自己的观点(支持其中一个观点，或者当“和事佬”，说具体问题具体分析)。这时，要重点考虑：支持请家教的观点有什么?(激发学生学习兴趣、培养学生交际能力、提高成绩、充分利用时间，等等。)反对请家教，有什么理由?(没有必要，课堂上学好的话，不必请家教;作用不大，如果学生自己没有主动性，请厂家教也没有用;占用过多学生自主学习、游玩的时间，不利于学生的健康发展;等等。)

　　第二种思路是把写作重点放在“我”的看法上。就如范文那样，先简要介绍存在的不同看法，然后着重论述自己的观点。当然，自己的观点可以是支持，也可以是反对，但总的说来，要言之成理，要有逻辑性，沿言要衔接、连贯、自然。 Analysis

　　[1] 对应outline的第1条，简要说明现象

　　[2] 对应outline的第2条，说明存在两种不同的看法。

　　[3] 对应outline的第3条，提出自己的看法。文章剩余部分就用来论证自己的看法。

　　[4] [6] 是[3] 的支持句。用first， second关联。

　　[5] [7] 分别对两个分论点予以展开;

　　[8] 用in one word总结自己的观点

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