2010年英语四六级考试：写作讲义精选(六)

　第一节
　　23. A Letter to the University
　　President about the Canteen
　　Service on Campus
　　January, 12th, 2002
　　Dear Mr. President,
　　I am a sophomore from Department 3 and I am writing to you about the food and service in the canteen on campus.
　　To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new. Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students’ supervision.
　　...Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above can be solved as soon as possible.
　　Yours respectfully
　　Li Ming
　　注：chairman 主席
　　一、事情的起因;
　　二、与书店交涉的经过;
　　三、呼吁服务行业提高服务质量。
　　邀请信
　　January 12th, 2003
　　Dear Sir/Bush,
　　Yours sincerely
　　Li Ming
　　注：假设你是李明，是学校英语俱乐部的主席，俱乐部近期要举行一次演讲比赛，请给本校
　　外教布什先生写一封信，请他来做评委。
　　English Club 英语俱乐部;judge 评委;native speaker 外教
　　earnestly 诚恳地;request you 请求您;do somebody a favor 帮某人一个忙
　　present 出席;happen 恰好;wedding 婚礼
　　第二节
　　邀请信
　　January 12th, 2003
　　Dear Sir/Bush,
　　Yours sincerely
　　Li Ming
　　注：假设你是李明，是学校英语俱乐部的主席，俱乐部近期要举行一次演讲比赛，请给本校
　　外教布什先生写一封信，请他来做评委。
　　English Club 英语俱乐部;judge 评委;native speaker 外教
　　earnestly 诚恳地;request you 请求您;do somebody a favor 帮某人一个忙
　　present 出席;happen 恰好;wedding 婚礼
　　24. A Letter of Application
　　for a Job
　　January 12th, 2003
　　Dear Sir/Madam,
　　I am responding to your advertisement in China .Daily on January 10th , 2003, which invites applications for interpreters. Enclosed with this letter is my resume which details my background.
　　I shall be much obliged if you will afford me an opportunity for an interview, and I appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
　　Thank you for considering this application.
　　Yours sincerely
　　Li Ming
　　Thank you for considering this application.
　　Yours sincerely
　　Li Ming
　　注：interpreter 口译员;roast duck 烤鸭
　　(58页)第八篇、第九篇 改错
　　(51页)真题 改错 02年6月 (52页)02年1月
　　(53页)01年6月 (54页)00年6月 (55页)00年1月
　　(64页)03年6月
　　respond 回信;software engineer 软件工程师;resume 简历
　　interview 面试;be obliged 感激;afford 提供
　　整个第二段，从三个方面入手：学习、社会活动和工作经验。

　第三节
　　24. A Letter of Application
　　for a Job
　　January 12th, 2003
　　Dear Sir/Madam,
　　I am responding to your advertisement in China .Daily on January 10th , 2003, which invites applications for interpreters. Enclosed with this letter is my resume which details my background.
　　I shall be much obliged if you will afford me an opportunity for an interview, and I appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.
　　Thank you for considering this application.
　　Yours sincerely
　　Li Ming
　　Thank you for considering this application.
　　Yours sincerely
　　Li Ming
　　注：interpreter 口译员;roast duck 烤鸭
　　(58页)第八篇、第九篇 改错
　　(51页)真题 改错 02年6月 (52页)02年1月
　　(53页)01年6月 (54页)00年6月 (55页)00年1月
　　(64页)03年6月
　　respond 回信;software engineer 软件工程师;resume 简历
　　interview 面试;be obliged 感激;afford 提供
　　整个第二段，从三个方面入手：学习、社会活动和工作经验。
　　改错
　　Directions:
　　In each passage there are altogether 10 mistakes, one in each numbered line. You may have to add a word, cross out a word, or change a word. Mark out the mistakes and put the corrections in the blanks provided. If you cross out a word, put a slash (/) in the blank.
　　注：改错错误类型有三种：
　　1、语法错误;
　　2、搭配错误;
　　3、逻辑错误。
　　改错题的做题规则：看清楚Direction的要求。
　　不可能考的错误：
　　1、标点
　　2、拼写
　　3、词义辨析
　　Example:
　　Television is rapidly becoming the literature
　　of our periods. Many of the argument 1.time/times/age having used for the study for literature as a 2.
　　school subject are valid for ∧ study of television.
　　3. the
　　按照词性顺序说明语法有关的考点：
　　1、名词：单复数
　　2、动词：(作谓语)时态、被动语态
　　Do you mind my smoking?你介意我抽烟吗?
　　分词主要是现在分词和过去分词的区别。
　　及物动词和不及物动词(55页第10题)
　　第四节
　　Directions:
　　In each passage there are altogether 10 mistakes, one in each numbered line. You may have to add a word, cross out a word, or change a word. Mark out the mistakes and put the corrections in the blanks provided. If you cross out a word, put a slash (/) in the blank.
　　注：改错错误类型有三种：
　　1、语法错误;
　　2、搭配错误;
　　3、逻辑错误。
　　改错题的做题规则：看清楚Direction的要求。
　　不可能考的错误：
　　1、标点
　　2、拼写
　　3、词义辨析
　　按照词性顺序说明语法有关的考点：
　　1、名词：单复数
　　2、动词：(作谓语)时态、被动语态
　　Do you mind my smoking?你介意我抽烟吗?
　　分词主要是现在分词和过去分词的区别。
　　及物动词和不及物动词(55页第10题)
　　3、形容词、副词(比较级、最高级)(54页第3题)
　　重要 important
　　4、代词一致
　　5、数词(基数词和序数词)
　　(53页第2题)分数的表达要用基数词和序数词
　　虚词：
　　介词、连词、冠词。
　　引导定语从句的连词有which和that
　　错误按照考的比例排在前5位的是：
　　1、单复数
　　2、时态
　　3、关系词
　　4、冠词
　　5、分词
　　Passage 4
　　When you start talking about good and bad manners you immediately start meeting difficulties. Many people just cannot agree what they mean. We asked a lady, who replied that she thought you could tell a well-mannered person on the way they occupied the 1.space around them—for example, when such a person walks down a street he or she is constantly unaware of 2. others. Such people never bump into other people.
　　However, a second person thought that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manners. 3.Instead, this other person told us a story, it he 4. said was quite well known, about an American who had been invited to an Arab meal at one of the 5.countries of the Middle East. The American hasn’t been 6.told very much about the kind of food he might expect.If he had known about American food, he 7.　might have behaved better.Immediately before him was a very flat piece of bread that looked, to him, very much as a napkin(餐 8.巾). Picking it up, he put it into his collar, so that it falls across his shirt. His Arab host, who had been 9. watching, said of nothing, but immediately copied 10.the action of his guest.And that, said this second person, was a fine example of good manners.
　　注：constantly 一直、总是
　　bump into 撞上
　　逻辑错误通常是正反错误，而且往往是有没有否定前缀。(通常一篇至少有一个)
　　tell 告诉、区别、辨别
　　which 属于关系词
　　that和which的区别：逗号后面只能用which
　　(51页第8题)
　　介词后面只能加which
　　(56页第6题)