2016年9月3日托福机经及解析之写作(网友版)

　　2016年9月3日托福独立写作真题回顾：

　　What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?

　　1. Plant trees and create parks

　　2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers

　　3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads

　　波波点睛：

　　题目为三选一题目，为了改善社区环境，人们采取的最有用的方式是以下哪种：1.种树建立公园 2.说服商店停止使用塑料袋 3.增加公共交通减少私家车的使用。波波提示，三选一题目，有两个要求：1.要明确提出自己的选择 2. 在论述中要提到三个选择。此题目要注意一点是，所有的落脚点都要在保护环境上，千万不要跑题。波波推荐选择第一个方式，即种树和建公园，具体思路如下：

　　2016年9月3日托福独立写作范文参考：

　　With the sense of community becoming much stronger, how to protect the environment of local communities has never failed to attract the attention of the general public. Therefore, when it comes to which is the most feasible measure to help environment, among planting trees and building parks, encouraging local shops to stop using plastic bags, and improving public transportation, people's notions may vary from one to another. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the first option is the best.

　　Firstly, growing trees and constructing parks can definitely help to ameliorate the environment. For one thing, more trees will contribute to the improvement of the air quality of the whole neighborhood. As is common sense, the prosperous industrial development has produced large amounts of waste gas, with the result that the haze and smoggy weather shroud quite frequently the major cities in our country. The current air condition necessitates the planting of trees, which can purify the contaminated air to a large extent. In other words, trees, the lung of the earth, play a vital role in absorbing some harmful gas and producing more fresh air through photosynthesis. For another, the public parks can be helpful to increase the biodiversity of the local community. Accompanying the rapid urbanization, an increasing number of natural lands have been utilized for constructing factories, shopping mall and skyscrapers, which greatly diminishes the natural habitats of animals, such as birds and squirrels. In this case, parks become the only place which can serve as habitats for those animals. Accordingly, the species of animals living here can become more diverse.

　　In addition, there are certain limitations for the other two options. Admittedly, reducing the use of plastic bags and making public transportation more accessible may also be conducive to the environmental protection in some degrees. To illustrate, if the plastic bags are prohibited, the so-called white pollution will be relieved. Also, easier access to public transportation means less use of private cars, which leads to the reduction of car exhaust. However, in comparison to planting trees and building parks, the above two measures enjoy less popularity among the residents of the community and thus are unlikely to be implemented. The underlying reason is that growing trees and constructing parks can create a more comfortable living environment while the other two choices can bring about more inconvenience. To be more specific, if shops stop the use of plastic shopping bags, the customers have to take a cloth bag while shopping. Also, taking public transportation will take longer time than driving the private cars, which means that commuters have to get up much earlier than before. It is self-evident that whether a policy can be carried out directly determines its effect, which is especially true of the above situation.

　　Taking what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the most effective way of protecting environment in local communities is to plant trees and create parks.

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　　第三种方法， compared with the former two ways, increasing access to public transportation and reducing the amount of automobiles on local roads can play a more significant and effective role in improving the local environment.

　　三选一的题目，今年出现频率极高，我酷学网八月份的托福写作点题班1小时授课中，专门详细剖析了3月19日，5月22日，6月25日，7月10号的三选一题目，指出，这绝对是今年的一大趋势，童鞋们一定要认真准备。

　　三选一的最重要破解要点就在于，你选择了C, 一定要记得在论证的时候，使劲黑A, B. 唯有如此，C的合理性依据(logical legitimacy)，即为什么C是最棒的选择，才能被建立起来。

　　分论点：

　　1. By increasing the access to various means of public transportation, local communities can improve the local environment in a relatively short period of time.

　　通过大量发展公共交通，很多社区可以在很短的时间内，就极大地改善环境。

　　--- 进一步发展： -这一段，可以把重点放在三个方法的时间消耗谁最短上。如果社区 place a premium on increasing the access to various means of public transportation, 这些项目的耗时不会特别长(these projects can be finished within three months to six months). 因此，很快，大量的社区居民就会感受到公交系统改善的好处( they will see the tangible benefits brought by the betterment of public transportation systems), 从而改变自己的出行方式，减少对于私家车的使用, 环境的改善也会很快实现。 In sharp contrast, 如果选择是plant trees，members of these communities need to wait for at least 2 to 3 years before these trees help to greatly improve the air quality. 此外，建设公园，周期也很长。

　　2. In terms of the contribution to the improvement of local environment, increasing the access to public transportation well dwarfs the other two methods.

　　在具体的改善环境的效果上来看，发展公共交通绝对是远胜于另外两种方法的。

　　--- 进一步发展： 这一段里面，可以不妨多用一些假设型论证。可以假设，在很多国家，一个社区，至少有大约1万名居民，1000辆私家车。目前，因为很多地方的公共交通设施还不完备，所以每天，这些居民的出行，都在制造着大量的空气污染和噪音污染。但是，如果改善了之后，可以想象，每周可以减少多少，每个月可以减少多少，每年可以减少多少，数字非常惊人。与之对比的是，商店停止提供塑料袋，的确是个很好的减少不可生物降解垃圾(non-biodegradable trash)的机会。但是，毕竟，不是所有居民都会随意地丢弃塑料袋，很多人会选择反复使用。 因此，这种方法，对于环境改善的真正效果存疑( is highly dubious)

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