2013年12月15日托福写作真题解析

　　As the education is playing more and more important role in social life, one controversial issue comes up that whether nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past. Admittedly, we are emphasizing that everyone is equal and stressing the right to express our ideas different from others. However, can we say that nowadays students do not respect teachers as much as in the past? Perhaps not. Despite of different people hold various perspectives, I, given this chance, prefer to assert that nowadays students respect teachers as much as in the past. My point of view, involves the fundamental and deep discussions as follows.

　　To begin with, one should emphasize that nowadays people’s concerns about the education are becoming more and more than in the past. It is undeniable that the teachers play the vital roles in the education and get more respect than in the past. To make it more compelling, let me use more details to demonstrate it. As we all know, to make ourselves more outstanding in this competitive society, we should study hard to compete with others. In addition, the teachers guide us in our study life and then we must respect teachers to gain the knowledge.However, in the past people always adopted several children and they main concerned about how to solve problem about the supplication of food instead of the education. Due to the change of importance of the teachers in the society, students would respect less than nowadays. Obviously, nowadays students respect teachers more than in the past.

　　In addition, another essential and compelling argument that always deserves people’s attention is that the nowadays teachers have more abundant knowledge and more wide perspectives, and then students become more adore teachers than before. Both common sense and our daily experience inform us that with the development of science and technology, teachers have more ways to gain the knowledge than what I can imagine, such as searching Internet, devoting themselves in to the specific research and so forth. What’s more, the nowadays teachers gain the higher degree than before, such as masters and professors instead of the undergraduate. Nevertheless, in the past teachers always gained knowledge from books. Hence nowadays teachers will be more profound than the teacher in the past and gain more respect from students.

　　Admittedly, there are some students do not respect teachers. However the number just occupies the small rate of all students. Furthermore we should acknowledge that there must students do not respect teacher in the past either.

　　To sum up, some people might still remain unconvinced, but the reasons I have analyzed would make them more aware of the dimensions of this issue. Hence at last, there will be no doubt that the nowadays students do more respect teachers than in the past.

　　2013年12月15日托福独立写作范文(20131215ML)：It is easier to maintain good health nowadays than it was in the past.重复20120526NA

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　　These days,at so fast-paced society,health problems are becoming more severe.There are some skeptical views around thinking that people in the past are prone to be more healthy than people nowadays.As for me,I think it is not convincing,because the truth is the average longevity these days is much longer than that in the past.Therefore,I believe it would be easier for people nowadays to maintain healthy.

　　Keeping healthy should never be overemphasized too much.Because health is wealth.As the studies of diet are more advanced than those in the past,it is more practical today to decide and keep a balanced diet.And it doesn't require much intelligence to realize this fact.I heard that decades ago,people have meat dish only around the New year time. Not only that,at that time,green leafy vegetables are very limited during winters.While balanced diet demand certain amount of protein and vitamin everyday.On the contrary,people in the modern world could wander around many supermarkets for necessary various kinds of food,what's more,they can see certain ingredients of them clearly.So,compared to the past,people nowadays are more likely to keep healthy.

　　Also,the living conditions and basic foundations in modern society can provide better circumstances for our exercise.I personally prefer jogging to relax myself.I can take advantage of the large squares everywhere due to such squares are really common these days.However,people living at that time,decades ago,were lack of so comfortable places for exercise.Sometimes,long-time overwork had led to serious physical damage,but they have to insist themselves on working without enough rest to avoid childrens' starvation.In this respect,people nowadays tend to solve their healthy problems much easier.

　　Some people would stress their opinions that because of the rapid development of modern society,people nowadays are busy in running their careers and pursuing other goals,having no time to exercise.So it's the modern lifestyle's responsibility to make people feel unhealthy.It's not convincing.We should notice that although life nowadays is busy and stressful,but we still have other choices when we are trying to deal with the healthy problems.While as I said,people in the past sometimes have no choice.For instance,as for me,I used to stop taking regular exercise during a very long period.Needless to say,I became less energetic,and had difficulty to concentrate very well.I became easy to be infected with flu for my weakened immune system.I recognized that and went for exercise.I stop finding excuses of ignoring exercising and I am fine now.Comparatively,what could people in the past do when they are in the shortage of necessities of living?Considering that,I think my view is correct.

　　In conclusion,Taking all these factors into consideration,I am strongly determined that people nowadays will live more healthy and are more likely to stay healthy.And I want to encourage people to adopt a relatively healthy lifestyle because they say that prevention is always better than cure.