2014年9月27日雅思写作解析及原创范文（新东方版）_第2页

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 写作目的

　　It seems that numerous young adults, especially those university leavers or newly married couple, are fond of renting an apartment or establishing own families rather than sharing the same house with their parents. For many years， people have been pondering the pros and cons of encouraging youngsters to live alone without reaching any definite consensus. This essay aims to endeavor to explore the reasons why living by oneself is so popular and then investigate its merits and demerits.

　　解析：

　　university leavers 大学毕业生

　　live by oneself 独居

　　二段：独立生活的原因分析：

　　The most essential reason why some people like to live by themselves is that they deliberately chosen the lives they want to lead and are fully aware of the consequence, they dare to brave challenges only with a view of savoring free and self-supporting life that their hearts desire. Another reason is that many youngsters choose to pursue their academic or career dreams in strange cities and thus live away from their native hometown, in this sense, they have no alternative but to live on their own.

　　解析：

　　Many youngsters choose to pursue their academic or career dreams in strange cities and thus live away from their native hometown, in this sense, they have no alternative but to live on their own.很多年轻人在异国或者他乡追求学业或者发展事业，因此，他们只能远离故土。

　　拓展：

　　They deliberately chosen the lives they want to lead and are fully aware of the consequence, they dare to brave themselves only with a view of savoring the free and self-supporting life that their hearts desire 他们深思熟虑地选择了自己渴望的生活方式，并且，愿意承担一切，仅仅为品味渴望的自由和独立。

　　三段：利好的展开：

　　To be sure, a number of benefits could be gained by opting for free lifestyle. The most glaring merit is that it is facile for young people to enhance their independence and temper their viability via living by themselves. More precisely, washing clothes, tidying up dorms and tackling crisis by oneself are the basic abilities one needs for his or her future life. Learning these skills at earlier age helps those who are in the formative years to face up to challenges later in their lives. Another merit deriving from independent life is that instead of living a stable and parasitic life in parents' home， those who prefer to live on their own could temper their interpersonal skills, money management, adaptability and viability. For example, I used to live alone in another city for short study time, I enjoyed that free and challenging life.