Describe a situation you received some useful advice
You should say:
Who gave you this advice
What kind of advice he/she gave you
Why he/she gave you this advice
And explain how did the advice help you
高分语料：My teacher observed that I was very good at analyzing things and understanding how different things can influence each other. I was very interested in economics at school when we studied it because it involves many different aspects of life, business, and social factors.She (my teacher) said that I would probably find it more satisfying to study something I was really interested in than try and do something that was maybe more popular like something related to oil and gas or medicine which is quite popular for women here.
高分语段：There was no particular situation or reason my father gave me some advice. In one evening I was sitting near him and watching TV. I was then 14 years old and was very fond of quiz shows. Both of us were enjoying the programme and a few minutes later my father asked me about my school. That was a bit embarrassing to talk about since my recent exam result was disappointing. He then told me some fascinating stories from his childhood and how he felt about school, study and other stuff. My father has a natural talent for telling compelling stories or maybe I love his stories because I like him very much. At one point I was so amazed to learn that he was very much like me and had more passion for playing, hanging out with friends than studying. He then explained me the importance of studying very attentively and how my academic performance will determine my future.
高分语料：When I described the intention to open up a small business, like a coffee shop, at the college street, Jonny suggested me not to open the shop. Besides, he advised me to keep patience and continue the study. Hearing the suggestion, I was astonished and thought that he might be jealous of my potential earning and success. So, I wanted to avoid him and his advice. He also said that my partner was not a trustworthy man. Moreover, the partner I selected was not insincere and I might not be able to continue the partnership for a long, he commented. Jonny asked me to think about the issue again and again, and then to decide either I will continue or not.
高分语料：One of my friends was the one who gave me the advice that affected strongly my decision. He had been studying in UK, in Manchester to be specific, for 4 years. And he had a lot of experience in study abroad. So I knew I needed to ask for his opinion. He told me that I should do a master program in the UK. It would only take me one year to receive a master degree. so it would not cost much time and money as well. he also said that the education system in the UK is very good, very practical and I would learn so much from when I study in there. He even told me stories about his student life in Manchester. and I immediately got so excited after hearing those things. And I finally decided to go study in UK. Partly because of his advice.