2013年12月英语四级考试真题答案卷一_第9页

Part1 Writing

The Impact of the Internet on Learning

第1段：引入活题，说明网络影响了 人们对学习的认识

Has exerted great influence on （obtaining information）

第2段：解释为什么教育不能和获取信息简单地等同起来

Critical thinking practical skills

第3段：总结观点，说明网络有利于学习，但性格和能力的培养对教育也很重要

Valuable, be fully aware of cultivating their character

范文点评：

The Impact of the Internet on Learning 【1】The Internet has exerted great influence on learning, so that an increasing number of individuals value it as a truth that obtaining information is equal to education. However,【2】as the picture warns us, education involves more than simply learning to obtain information.

From my perspective,【3】education also includes critical thinking and practical skills rather than a mere accumulation of information and knowledge.【4】For one thing, critical thinking is essential to scientific progress, contributing to innovation and technical advances, just as Confucius warned us, “ Learning without thinking leads to confusion.”【5】For another, it is crucial to apply what you have learned to practice and that's the very reason why exceptional scientists accomplish great achievements in their fields.

【6】In a word, the internet does provide valuable information for learners, but people should be fully aware of the essence of education and attach importance to cultivating their character and developing their ability instead of just giving priority to dependence on the Internet.【7】thus, only by emphasizing innovation can education be completely fulfilled in practice.

【1】引入话题,说明网络影响了人们对 学习的认识。

【2】说明图片隐含的意义。

【3】解释学习过程中涉及的重要因素： 评判思维和应用能力。

【4】【5】使用 For one thing... For another...结构具:体阐述并例证评 判思维和应用能力的重要性。

【6】总结观点。

【7】强调创新思维对教育 和学习的重要性。