2013年12月大学英语四级作文辅导4

1．  运用比较的手段阐述自己的观点，赞成一个反对一个。

 A1A2A3—B1B2B3

P1: S1 Topic: the subjects to be compared

   S2 Thesis: my preference for B over A

P2: S3 Concede A’s advantage 1

   S4 But A’s disadvantage 1

   S5    A’s disadvantage 2

   S6    A’s disadvantage 3

   S7 Illustrate B’s advantage1

   S8    B’s advantage2

   S9    B’s advantage3

P3:S10 Conclusion

 A1B1-A2B2-A3B3

P1: S1 Topic: the subjects to be compared

   S2 Thesis: my preference for B over A

P2: S3 Concede A’s advantage 1

   S4 But A’s disadvantage 1

   S5 B’s corresponding advantage1

   S6    A’s disadvantage 2

   S7 B’s corresponding advantage2

   S8    A’s disadvantage 3

   S9 B’s corresponding advantage3

P3:S10 Conclusion

 Sentence Patterns

S1 With the advent of computers/the internet/TV,

the development of science and technology, …plays a important role/part in our daily life

the improved standard of living,            increasing attention is drawn/called to…

S2         commonly     believed

  While it is generally      held        that A…, I believe B

widely       accepted

S3 It is true that

  To be sure,      A…

S4 But the   chief      faults     are

           Obvious    defects

S5 Studies          shows

   Researches      demonstrate      that…

   Experiment      reveal 

S6 On the contrary,     the advantages of B…   far outweigh           advantages of A…

  On the other hand,                        carry more weigh than

S7 For one thing, B…

S8 For another, B also…

S9 Although B   f ails to   …few things can     be compared with

can not                      match                 B in terms of …

                                           equal

S10 The     advantage    of B is more than…

Significance

 2．  通过比较来说明描写两个事物的性质。 或者有时侯所比较的事物都有明显的优点和缺点，既不能完全肯定某一事物，也不能彻底否定另一事物。

 P1: S1 Topic: the subjects to be compared

   S2 Thesis: General view of A and B

P2: S3 A’s advantage

   S4 A’s advantage

   S5 A’s advantage

   S6 A’s disadvantage

   S7 B’s advantage

   S8 B’s advantage

   S9 B’s disadvantage