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2017年12月英语四级写作真题分析:医患关系

中华考试网   2017-12-18   【

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  【解析】

  题材: 单一命题议论文;

  要求: 给建议;

  话题: 如何最好地处理医生和病人的关系

  观点: 和谐医患关系很重要

  方法: 医生提高职业能力;病人提高素质

  首段设计:引话题+明主旨

  1.众所周知+现状描述,背景介绍。2. 我认为+观点

  It is beyond dispute that the increasingly nervous relationship between doctors and patients has triggered a rather widespread concern among the general public, as numerous reports about medical negligence have been unveiled continually. I am of an opinion that there is no more significance than keeping a harmonious physician-patient relation.

  中间段设计:方法如下+方法分析

  1.方法如下。2. 方法一:提高职业能力。(分析原因结果)3. 方法二:病人要提高素质。(分析原因结果)4. 数据/例子

  Several possible measures relating to relieve the tension of doctor-patient relationship are included as follows. For one thing, owing to the fact that doctors in some local hospitals who lack the medical skills are not trusted fully by the public, they ought to improve their occupational qualities to assure the safety of medical work. For another, for patients, they should learn to trust and appreciate doctors because of their professional skills. Take my recent experience in hospital for instance. It was effective communication between me and my surgeon that enabled the operation more smoothly.

  结尾段设计:总结+展望

  1. 总结。2. 展望

  Establishing a doctor-patient trust relationship, all in all, has brought about a series of positive effects on every aspect of life. Only by making collective efforts from both two sides can the relationship be prompted.

  【参考范文】

  Recent years, the relationship between doctors and patients has been a heated topic. However, with the increasingly serious physician-patient relationship, it is important to find out some ways to solve the problem. Therefore, some measures mentioned below are the most important aspects that we should take into consideration.

  On the one hand, it is indispensable that communication between doctor and patients should be strengthened due to the the fact that doctor-patient communication can be seen as a bridge of two-way communication between doctors and patients, which is beneficial for them to improve their relationship. As a matter of fact, although sometimes there are some defects in medical infrastructure, patients can make allowance for them friendly for their good relationship. On the other hand, the most important character doctor should have is professional ethics that is the foremost way to gain trust from patients.

  All in all, it is high time that both hospitals and patients should take some steps to deal with current poor relationship. Only in this way, can we create a harmonious society.

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