2014年12月CET4写作考前预测及范文点评

　　距离2014年6月14日的大学英语四级考试还有1天时间，老师提醒广大考生在这短短的两天时间里，一定不要松懈复习，尤其是在写作方面。因为，写作本来就是一个日积月累的过程，一旦疏于练习，就很容易影响写作水平的发挥，提笔忘字也不无可能。更为重要的是，通常，我们认为，写作是在备考最后阶段最能给我们提分的环节，如果勤于练习，熟悉写作话题，那么在考试过程中就会下笔有神，从而取得可喜的效果。下面，是文都老师给大家提供的一个写作话题，希望大家在认真独立完成写作后，再结合点评与参考范文进行对照，熟记其中的经典表达及句型句式。

　　【考前预测】

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Competition. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1. 竞争使人们充满创造力，使人们更有效率;

　　2. 竞争促使生产出更好的产品和提供更优质的服务;

　　3. 竞争促进了社会的进一步发展。

　　【参考范文】

　　Competition

　　Competition makes people more creative and effective. It urges them to plan better, to try harder, and to achieve more. With a desire to excel in their work, people tend to perform more creatively and more efficiently.

　　Competition helps produce better products and provide better services. In the present world of intense competition, every manufacturer tries his best to outmatch his competitor by producing goods of better quality at lower costs. As a result, consumers pay less and receive better service.

　　Competition promotes further development of society. If there were no competition, people would remain complacent and be unwilling to make any efforts or risk anything new. However, with fierce competition going on, they exert themselves to accomplish more. Their accomplishment will, in one way or another, contribute to the progress of society.

　　【范文解析】

　　本篇范文采用经典的三段式写作方法展开，第一段呼应题目的第一个方面，即竞争使人们充满创造力，使人们更有效率;第二段呼应题目的第二个方面，即竞争促使生产出更好的产品和提供更优质的服务;第三段呼应题目的第三个方面，即竞争促进了社会的进一步发展。本文的突出之处在于篇章结构清晰，衔接合理，在呼应题目要求的同时，做了进一步的扩展，行文流畅。

　　【高分妙招】

　　四级作文很关注社会热点现象、学生生活及思想有关的话题。因此，平时要多关注社会生活，对自己的学习、生活多做思考，保持积极、健康、向上的人生观、世界观和价值观，这样写出来的文章会获取高分。