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英语四级作文预测题(2)

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  (二)
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
  Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
  1. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的;
  2. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的
  3. 收入差距对社会的影响
  ●审题概述●?
  议论文,根据题目要求文章可分为三点:收入差距的合理性;收入差距的不合理性;对社会的影响。在叙述第一、二点时,可适当地的展开一两个小点。注意各点之间的衔接,以及论证的逻辑。
  ● 范文●?
  Income Gap
  1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. 3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
  1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction
  that they obtain from work.
  1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too
  wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.
  ◇第一段思路点评:
  收入差距的合理性
  ◇语言点提示:
  1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接点题
  2 reflect 意为“反映”
  3 in one’s view 意为“在某人看来”(分析观点时常用词组)
  4 efficiency 意为“效率”
  ◇第二段思路点评:
  收入差距的不合理性
  ◇语言点提示
  1On the other hand:意为“另一点、另一方面”(提出相反观点,与上文衔接)
  2risk doing something 意为“冒险做某事”
  3another point: 提出另一小点
  4back up 意为“支持”
  ◇第三段思路点评:
  收入差距的影响
  ◇语言点提示
  1As anything has two sides, so…... 议论文常用句式
  2motivate:意为“激励,刺激”
  3get rid of:意为“摆脱,除去”
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