2017年BEC商务英语中级作文模板超全解析：投诉信

　　投诉信结构：

　　投诉事由

　　详述事件/投诉理由

　　提出要求

　　常用句型：

　　Letters of complaint

　　I am writing to complain about …

　　I am not satisfied with …

　　I must therefore insist that …

　　例题

　　l You recently attended a one-day training course on health and safety. You were disappointed with the course and you have decided to write a letter of complaint to the training company.

　　l Read the advertisement below, which gives details of the course. You have already made some notes on the advertisement.

　　l Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your letter to Moira Geddings at GBG Certification Services.

　　l Do not include postal addresses.

　　[范文]

　　Dear Mrs Geddings,

　　I write regarding a training course on health and safety which I attended 27 November.

　　When I booked this course, I chose your company as it came highly recommended and the courses seemed to be of a high standard. I was promised an experienced trainer but unfortunately he was sick and the replacement was not as good as expected. Regarding the information packs these were only a pile of loose photocopies, which was not promised. The class was supposed to be about 8 people but in mine there were about 15. Finally, I should make it clear that the class started 1 hour late, and the lunch that was served, was cold.

　　I am sure you can understand my disappointment. I would therefore be glad if you could investigate this matter.

　　I look forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Lisa Kostevska

　　Cabin Attendant

　　索赔：

　　compensate, indemnify, refund, apologise

　　投诉信范文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam

　　I am writing to complain about your Tour 5210 to Mexico on 15 June.

　　The quality of the food in the hotels was terrible and everybody in our group was sick most of the time. I would like to remind you of the fact that your advertisement said “superior hotels and fantastic food all the way”.

　　We must insist, therefore, that you refund at least 10% of our money as compensation.

　　If we do not receive adequate compensation within 7 days, we will be forced to write to the local newspaper.

　　Yours faithfully

　　比较强烈投诉抗议信:

　　Dear Sir or Madam

　　I am writing about the heating unit you installed for us on 15 March last year.

　　Unfortunately, the heating system exploded on 12 January this year, and blew a large hole in the roof, thus resulting in a large damage to both our workshop and stocks.

　　I should like to remind you that we wrote to you on 9th December last year because it was making a strange noise, but you did not give us a reply.

　　We must insist, therefore, that you replace the heating system immediately and pay for our damage worth US $ 400,000.

　　Your faithfully